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Margaret Maron’s Hard Row

Last year, about this time, authors and reviewers started releasing their Top Ten lists. The one I was most interested in was the Top Ten Mysteries. After reading five or six different lists, I realized I had not read a single one of the books. That bothered me to the point that I was determined to see what a listed book was like. Hard Row by Margaret Maron made several lists. HardRow

I finished this story last night and have now found a new author to read. Yeah! And she has several other books. Yeah!

In terms of story craft, I will have to read the book over as expected. However, on the first read, one chapter stuck out because it was so unlike all the others previous to it. There was a point of having it in the book and craft-wise, I was suspicious of what that was.

The story follows two main characters who are married to each other, one is a Judge and the other is a Sheriff’s Deputy. Both are from rural, farming North Carolina so farm life and the rural south are very much a part of the story. The story is very heavy-handed with farm, crop, and rural life. Some readers might say that is characterization, and I would agree. For some readers, it would go too far and detract from the story. There is a line there. Since I’m interested in the characterization, I was more than willing to see where it went.

The chapter I wondered about is a family scene where the many generations of the Judge’s family decide what to plant for the next season. There are many people in the chapter and the level of detail in the conversation is intense. I was most interested in how the chapter drove the story which was a murder mystery. The characters discuss gross profits, pesticides, labor and equipment requirements among other things. Not once is the murder mentioned. I’m sure if I went back into the chapter and read it, at least one tertiary detail would be there for the over-all mystery.

The point of the chapter is educational to the reader. The level of detail is important to understand the motive behind the murder. As a writer, the question is always, “Is there a better way to present this?”

My main concern is that it is dumped into a single chapter that sticks out. It probably wouldn’t be so obvious to the average reader just going along for the ride. It was skillfully done, in dialogue, with context. I’m wondering what are some other ways to do this? Info dump to the reader without losing the reader?

These are Not hair plugs

My hair has a mind of it’s own. I thinks its in its teenage punk years.

Once or twice a year, my front hairline cowlick decides to shed then sprout all over again. Its less than a one inch area but it is strong. When it sprouts, it shoots straight up. It pushes the natural front bangs up, as if I stylishly hair-shellacked the sprouts into that position. I don’t know what hair plugs look like on women but a one inch vertical climb poking through bangs that are doing their best to behave might be it.

This would all be fine if the hair lived in its own world and I could not be a part of it. However, the cowlick sprouting hair and the normal downward bangs fight against each other all day and I can feel it.

My husband said he wouldn’t have noticed my hair if I didn’t point it out. However, he looked askance at me when he said this, leaning back and away from the hair-sprouting cowlick.

The good news is this only lasts a day or two at the most. The sprouts grow to the point where they can return to their natural leaning-back attitude and stay there until the next shedding cycle.

And how is your hair today?

January 1, 2012

Memo to Staff

From CEO, Big Game Company

RE: Concerning Windows Phone Technical Writers

 

It has come to my attention that the north building, our oldest building on the main campus, has several leaks in the roof and around the windows. These seasonal wind and rain storms caused damage to the carpets, dry wall, electrical systems, and I understand the elevator and door security systems haven’t been working for some time.

Due to the severity of the work required on the building, I decided to stroll over to that part of campus myself. I expected to see the usual hustle and bustle seen around other buildings in the Mobile Games Division. But the place was empty. No cars in the parking lot. No people in the building. That would explain why the usual quick complaints about facilities were not logged. However, where did all those technical writers go?

I heard the hottest mobile platform, Windows Phone, requires less documentation but I know it isn’t true. For so long, I ignored the backlash from the Language Specialists and the Legal Department as the usual grumbling. Then I grabbed one of those phones for myself. Where is the documentation? Surely our customers need at least a page of specific, translatable, and legally-approved text to explain the on/off button for sound? How do we expect our customers to use our products if there is no documentation? We need to be completely proactive on this. I expect that building repaired and fully-staffed with writers to explain the most mundane and minute aspects of our product on that platform. I suspect there are toddlers, octogenarians, and recent immigrants who are desperate for more documentation.

Our other mobile platforms have thriving documentation departments. Let them be an example to the Windows Phone team to get with the program. We can’t let our customer service slip. Let’s be proactive!

Get to work!

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